Um, wow! i don't believe for a second this is your first fic. It's really awesome, and you know, it just works. I haven't seen much of Atlantis but you somehow managed to nail both universes.

And Donna is made for the family thing rather than the running thing, so yes, this is just perfect for her. I probably would have like dto see a bit more interaction between Jack, Martha & the rest of the 'who' people and Donna though.