My pleasure! I'm glad I was help rather than hindrance. I try to use my social aggressiveness and inability to shut up for the forces of Good.

Good luck with the rewriting. Some characters are simply harder landings to stick than others, I think; I know there are definitely some voices that make me a lot more nervous to write than others. But I can promise that while I am honestly critical in my commentary when I'm opening the analysis threads over at sga_talk, I am also constructive and reasonably nice in how I phrase things. So far, the other comm members have proven likewise, thankfully.