Beta needed: SGA prequel to "Relationship"

[michelel72]

Is there anyone out there who read my disturbing SGA fic "Relationship" and would be willing to beta the possibly slightly less disturbing prequel? I can just post it, but I'd appreciate a second pair of eyes first to make sure I'm not missing anything egregious. This would be more for content and flow than SPaG.

Note: This story primarily involves OCs and contains (mild) underage sexual activity as well as creepy dysfunctional behavior on the part of one of the OCs. It's ~5700 words and is a bit artsy, as if everything else wasn't offputting enough.

Comments

[sophia-sol.livejournal.com]

I'd be willing to look it over for you! I don't guarantee I'll have anything useful to say, since too often if I like a fic I don't notice its flaws, but I can give it a whirl, if you want.

[michelel72.livejournal.com]

Many thanks! Copy sent. If you don't see anything you care to mention, that's fine, but I'm curious whether it works at all. Thank you!