ext_21584 ([identity profile] michelel72.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] michelel72 2015-12-20 11:43 pm (UTC)

I like the way you condense what really works about it. And everything about why he's so outmatched makes sense: yes, he should have backup, but there are valid reasons why he doesn't.

As for intoxication: I know, right? It's the weirdest thing. I grew up around a lot of recreational drug-and-alcohol use, so I get why it's a nope for me in fic as such; and yet I adore altered mental states that ... aren't deliberate, I guess? (The real mystery to me is why alcohol-to-cope-with-something doesn't trip me up the same way, but ... well, that's common enough that I guess it's just as well.)

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