... I haven't posted any of the multiple cases where I have Tonya talking for multiple paragraphs. (I don't know if British English does this, but officially, American English punctuation says that if someone's quoted speech is more than one paragraph, each paragraph should start with quotation marks, but each internal paragraph should not end with them. I don't like that convention, especially in fic, so I usually find excuses to insert "stage directions" as intervening mini-paragraphs ... and I ran out of ways to do that! Whyyyyy. (First draft, it's a first draft, just keep reminding yourself it's a first draft ...))
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... I haven't posted any of the multiple cases where I have Tonya talking for multiple paragraphs. (I don't know if British English does this, but officially, American English punctuation says that if someone's quoted speech is more than one paragraph, each paragraph should start with quotation marks, but each internal paragraph should not end with them. I don't like that convention, especially in fic, so I usually find excuses to insert "stage directions" as intervening mini-paragraphs ... and I ran out of ways to do that! Whyyyyy. (First draft, it's a first draft, just keep reminding yourself it's a first draft ...))