Beta (no longer) needed: Angsty threesome PWP (no, really)

[michelel72]

what is this I don't even

I wrote smut, guys. You know, the stuff I usually skim and won't beta? Yeah, that. I don't even know.

And now I need a beta. Explicit sex (McKay/Keller/Sheppard) with bonus angst, because that's just how I roll. Unequal relationship dynamics (but this isn't McShep pining, don't worry, and no consent issues or partner betrayal); a teensy mention of ridiculously minor bondage kink; about 1800 words.

(ETA: I know have two brave volunteers and one sympathizer. Thanks, all!)

Everything I know about writing explicit sex comes from reading fanfic and fanficrants, so ... yeah.

Anyone?

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Comments

[michelel72.livejournal.com]

If you're willing, that would be lovely — and if it crosses the line for you, you can send it back, no foul. (I actually have the same hang-up implied for two of the three participants, so I'm totally sympathetic to stuff just not working for someone.) I don't see an email contact in your profile — the fic is currently in an MSWord .doc file — so what format/contact method do you prefer? (You can PM me back to keep it private if you like.) Thank you!