Fanfic draft pass 2

Previously on michelel72's Journal ... I finished my first fic ever (a Stargate: Atlantis/Doctor Who crossover fanfic) and offered access to it to anyone who was willing to read it in draft form. My beta, aurora_novarum, did a kick-ass job and inspired me to rewrite it, so I asked folk to hold off.

Well, I've rewritten it, and the new version is now ready. (I think.) Right now, I have it friends-locked to whoever previously requested access. It's buried time-wise (because formatting stuff on LJ can be something of a pain, and Obsessive Girl is Obsessive), so this post serves as the index post. Anyone who is interested in seeing it but not currently on the filter can just drop me a comment here to be added. No pressure or guilt-trips, incidentally; anyone who isn't interested or is too busy doesn't need to volunteer, seriously.

Technically, it's still drafty, though as far as I know it's ready for public posting. I can't really see it any more; I've read it so many times that I can't tell whether it's clunky or if I'm just fighting knowing what comes when. Please, feel free to point out any problems or improvements I can make. (And seriously, I'm kind of desperate for a title; I really don't like the one I have but don't have any better ideas.)

Edit 1/24/08: Entries made public and posted to sga_noticeboard and sg_prompts.

( Headers, link, and such under the cut ... )

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