Beta needed: SGA prequel to "Relationship"

Is there anyone out there who read my disturbing SGA fic "Relationship" and would be willing to beta the possibly slightly less disturbing prequel? I can just post it, but I'd appreciate a second pair of eyes first to make sure I'm not missing anything egregious. This would be more for content and flow than SPaG.

Note: This story primarily involves OCs and contains (mild) underage sexual activity as well as creepy dysfunctional behavior on the part of one of the OCs. It's ~5700 words and is a bit artsy, as if everything else wasn't offputting enough.