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I got a reader! I asked on FB if anyone knew a place to find alpha readers, and a friend offered! And it turns out she recently started writing fanfic, too!
I'm proceeding with my plan of adding some foreshadowing to "day 3" and early "day 4", and then keeping going through my character's crisis, at which point I'll have to figure whether the now-slightly-less-abrupt resolution works or if it needs to be dragged out across another plot-day. And I have someone I can bounce those thoughts off of!
Days 1-3 are written; 3 is sketchy but there, and it's a good breather, I guess. It can always be filled in later. Now I see how far I can get in day 4. ( Snippet )
I'm proceeding with my plan of adding some foreshadowing to "day 3" and early "day 4", and then keeping going through my character's crisis, at which point I'll have to figure whether the now-slightly-less-abrupt resolution works or if it needs to be dragged out across another plot-day. And I have someone I can bounce those thoughts off of!
Days 1-3 are written; 3 is sketchy but there, and it's a good breather, I guess. It can always be filled in later. Now I see how far I can get in day 4. ( Snippet )