This is the fic that never ends ...
This is such a talky fic. It's starting to read like a bunch of infodumps strung together. But that's fine; this is a first pass.
... that is up to 46k words on day two of the plot, and day two is only about halfway done. *cries* Day three should be shorter (... please), and there are "only" two other days of real plot after that. Of which the last will likely be the longest ... *cries again*
I feel like the subtitle of this thing should be "low self-esteem vs. *~* f r i e n d s h i p *~*", heh.
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This is such a talky fic. It's starting to read like a bunch of infodumps strung together. But that's fine; this is a first pass.
... that is up to 46k words on day two of the plot, and day two is only about halfway done. *cries* Day three should be shorter (... please), and there are "only" two other days of real plot after that. Of which the last will likely be the longest ... *cries again*
I feel like the subtitle of this thing should be "low self-esteem vs. *~* f r i e n d s h i p *~*", heh.
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